shawn-lepus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clockcrew actionfigures]

What? Huh?

That was really good. I really liked the plastic look of all your action figures, impressive style. The play on all the crappy toy commercials was very well done. I had a hard time hearing your voice acting in your movie. You might want to amp it up a little.

Canuckles-Clock responds:

thanks

[EgoCity Chap III]

Super good

That was really outstanding. The animation was smooth and the style was sweet. The only problem was your background music was too loud and I couldn’t hear what your charters were saying. It looked like a good story by the subtitles, but if you have voice acting you shouldn’t really need to read your movie. But overall I really liked it. Keep’em coming!

[The Battle of the Ages]

Pretty good

I liked where it was going. Where did Link's Arms and legs go? That was my only major problem.

[GAME BOYZ]

Messed up

That was crazy and super funny. I like to see artist using more traditional techniques, it makes for a much better looking toon. Good work!

[banana phone booth]

Why bother coming up with new ideas

When you can just rip off people better than you.

[Backwards Music]

Lame

This has been done to death. First off whatever you were doing with the robot voice wasn’t working, it came across with a lot of static. Also don’t just copy a joke that was played out five years ago. Try something new.

Zephret responds:

It still gets people. Take a look at the reviews for My Grandmother's Murder, another submission by me.

[Lambi 2]

Very Nice

That was outstanding! I really liked your use of color and shadows. The whole thing had an almost 3D effect to it. Keep it up and I hope to see more like it soon!

[-CONFLICT-]

Looks good, sounds bad

Your animation was very good. It had good drawing and pretty smooth moment. The story was really slow, I’m not sure if you were trying to set a mood but it didn’t really come across. Also the sound effects didn’t really match the action, like when the one girl ripped off the other girls pantyhose it had a glass braking sound. I hope to see more in the future, just check out some sound effect sites.

[Cause of WWI Teaser]

Too short

I really hope you do something with that. Your graphics are very good. But you need to check your document size, you could see graphics sticking out of your black. You need to resize your stage or put a layer on the top that can act like a letterbox. Other than that I hope to see more!

[2004 Olympic games]

Funny the first time

That was way better when I saw it on Late Night with Conan O'Brien over a year ago.

Citizen66 responds:

And what makes you think that I'm not him?